Breathing in our thoughts
Limbs are intertwining
Exchanging our youths
Heat consuming our flesh
Heartbeats rhythmically align
Serpents unleashing within
Surroundings are distorting
Breathing is the only sound
Living now has a meaning.
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1 comment:
I like this one too, but again if you added some stanzaic structure it would be a lot more powerful. But I really like this one. It's very physical and it provokes that sense within the reader.
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