Thursday, December 7, 2006
A Nautical Nonsense
If anyone is clever enough to make sense of this I’d love to hear it!
Caressing the marble and stone
Love that was special for one
The waste in the fever and heat
How i wish you were here with me now
Body that curls in and dies
Heart shares that awful daylight
Warm like a dog around your feet
How i wish you were here with me now
Hangman looks around as he waits
Cord stretches tight then it breaks
Someday we will die in your dreams
How i wish you were here with me now
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JOptionPane.showMessageDialog(null, "DARKSHINE, i dont get a single freaking word of that:P", "Feedback");
hahahha..
Java flashback! eeeekkk!
You Java nerd haha but a cool java nerd..
its something about the relization of death, tell me if i'm on the right track here, so i'ed be more confedent to continue :p
yeah close :)
ok i'm gonna go one step further and say its the relization of the end. specialy the relization that every relationship no matter what kind it was, will find its end somewhere; and that even the memory of that relationship is bound to find its death [end]. the fact of every relationship that it lays dearer or more specail in some1's heart more than the other, even if they r strongly connected. this could be my head being a bit subjective an anylizing it under my own experence but i could easiely see it in the piece, want me to write u a full analysis :p
do you have to take some sort of special class to understand poetry or is it suppose to come naturally?
*cries*
hahah
lol
wow thats the best interpetation i've heard good job sweetie.
lol dont worry khanum just read it and write the first thing that comes to your head that you understood from the poem..
LET IT ALL FLOW OUT OF YOU :D
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaya <--geek. but if posible darkshine can u tell me wat did u anitially entended it to porject?
khanum: to be fair i have to say that i took a double BA in english lit and linguistic PLUS i some times write as well, ya i know my spelling sux so badly it hardly shows :p also :-s i got this geeky hobby of anylizing things and look for the deeper meaning, its quit simple want me to show u (jumps up and down with excitment) ^_^
I make sense of it honey.
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I really really like this one! And it makes complete sense to me, although I can't seem to put it into words!
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